10 thoughts on “Smooth

      1. “I would sooner go deaf
        than never again listen”

        In both situations, listening is no longer an option. So you’re basically saying:

        “I would sooner never listen,
        than never again listen.”

        Of course, there are a variety of meanings this could possess, my favorite one being:

        “I never want to stop listening.”

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  1. Beautiful image + beautiful meaning + beautiful descriptions = beautiful poem

    The simplicity is amazing; I don’t know how you do that. Literally you can take 5 lines and make them flow so smoothly and beautifully. You tell a story in this tiny piece and it’s just astounding to me. Lovely poem; I really love how idyllic yet somber it feels.

    Overall just another amazing piece ❤

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