I caught a whiff of the final rose
when following a trail of wilted petals,
on a search for a place to heal
the damage caused by running
through thorns.
I found you behind emerald vines
clinging to the sills of open windows,
tending neglected flowers,
in a garden with little hope
of regrowth.
And I knew that this
was the beginning of forever
for a broken honeybee.
I saw “Honeybee” and was like, “Oh, this must be happy! How could something about honeybees not be?”
…ya learn something new every day π
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I mean
It kind of is happy. The tone is a little somber, but it’s about two brokens finding love to start their forever and better future together despite painful pasts.
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“…tending neglected flowers / in a garden with little hope…”
It’s kinda sad π At any rate, not optimistic lol
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That’s referring to a damaged past. feeling all is lost or gone, But there’s one remaining flower, that better future ahead for the honeybee and the one she’s fallen in love with. Both broken from damaged pasts, but moving forward towards a forever together.
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Huh, I can see that now
Moral of the story, complain about Marysa’s dark poetry so that she can point out what it really means π
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This is a fantastic piece that is so full of earnest emotion; raw. I love the descriptions; they are so delicate with an amazing rhythm. It has a beautiful flow and impactful meaning. I love it.
Excellent piece as always.
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Thank you, I wasn’t feeling great about this piece but the feedback has been positive so I guess it’s decent lol
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So sweet!
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I love how you have managed to take a single metaphor and develop it into an elaborate and complex poem. Well done!
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Thank you β€
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This is so cute; I love how it has a sweet purity about it but also conveys a deeper, more beautiful meaning. I love how it’s such a little poem but uses such pretty descriptions to describe a bigger story. Beautiful piece β€
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Awh thank you gabby! Been a while π
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It really has been. </3 How have you been doing?
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