Death is not beautiful
when you’re actually dead
But barely living
in half-dead trees,
half-dried roses,
and deathly thin models
it’s often alluring.
How ironic that
fallen leaves,
broken thorns,
and ruined bodies
are considered beauty
but death is only pretty
if you’re barely living.
Okay, wow, this is just wow. It’s something I think the world needs to read, so many people are focused on fake beauty, or believing that life should be lived in pain, because many claim beauty is pain (while it’s quite the opposite.) The flower references are amazing, I love the rose one especially (since they’re one of my favorite flowers lol.) It reminds me of “every rose has it’s thorn,” but with a twist that fits today’s standards rather than the 70’s/80’s era xD
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1st of all thank you
2nd I agree (duh, wrote the poem lol)
3rd great song
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1st You’re welcome lol
2nd ha! That’s funny
3rd ikr? I do too, I love a lot of that music, I kinda grew up on it since my mom loves it xD
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you’ve got quite the distinct poetic voice.. nice.
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Awh, thank you ^^
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How true your words are.
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This is really good. It’s deep and dark and sad and depressing and true. Nicely done.
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Thank you
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